I offer a range of developmental editing services, from a quick review of your first 5,000 words to a detailed double-pass analysis of your entire manuscript. Regardless of what editing package you choose, my goal is that you will return to your novel excited and armed with the knowledge, confidence, and direction to tell the strongest version of your story.
My genre specialities are: Fantasy, Romance (any spice level), Adventure, Paranormal, and Historical Fiction.
I have open availability starting from November 2024. If you'd like to work with me, please don't hesitate to reach out, and be sure to submit an interest form before 12/31/24 to take advantage of the 30% off introductory pricing.
Editorial Services
A comprehensive edit of the beginning of your project that provides both big-picture and line-level suggestions.
This service is perfect for...
Querying or pitching writers who want a strong, polished opening.
Writers who want to get a feel for the strength of their prose, but who think that they can carry out further line edits on their own.
Potential clients who want a get a better feel for my process before committing to a larger edit.
Manuscript Edit clients who want a more in-depth look at their first several pages.
Questions we will answer
Does your opening properly hook readers, while also introducing them to your character and world?
Do we get a strong sense of your character, as well as the emotional journey they are about to embark on?
Is there a strong premise, with potential to sustain an entire story?
Is your prose clear and effective, while also creating evocative images and emotions?
Deliverables
At the end of the edit, you will receive:
A short edit letter (2-3 pages) based on two read-throughs.
An annotated document with marginal comments and line-edit suggestions in track changes.
Advice on where to go next, as well as resources that might help you moving forward (if applicable).
Cost
$250 $175 (Special Introductory Pricing until 12/31/24)
Bundles
Pair with a manuscript evaluation, and save $100.
The First 5K
Still Have Questions?
Check out my FAQ and policies pages, or fill out my contact form.
A single pass edit of your project, focused on big picture suggestions for strengthening your characters and story arcs.
A manuscript evaluation does not include any line edits, but I will make broad suggestions on prose and voice.
This service is perfect for...
Writers who want an overview of where they can improve, but who don't want the cost or detail of a full developmental edit.
Writers who have a strong sense of their self-editing skills, but who still want guidance and feedback on where they should focus their efforts.
Questions we will answer
Is your character believable and interesting? Do they embark on a journey of self-discovery (or downfall) over the course of the story?
Is your plot satisfying, with proper pacing, cause-and-effect, and emotional investment?
Is there a broader message or theme that is strengthened by the characters, plot, and world? Are motifs effective and evocative?
Are there any lapses in logic or believability?
Does the form of your project (prose style, POV, etc.) serve the story you want to tell?
Deliverables
At the end of the edit, you will receive:
An edit letter (10-15 pages) based on one read-through.
Advice on where to go next, as well as resources that might help you moving forward (if applicable).
Cost:
$0.015/word $0.01/word (Special Introductory Pricing until 12/31/24)
Bundles
Pair with a first 5k edit, and save $100.
The Manuscript Evaluation
Still Have Questions?
Check out my FAQ and policies pages, or fill out my contact form.
A double pass, comprehensive edit of your project that includes marginal comments, an editorial letter, and a book map to help you better understand your story arcs.
A developmental edit does not include any line edits, but I will make broad suggestions on prose and voice.
This service is perfect for...
Writers who want an in-depth, detailed analysis of their strengths and weaknesses.
Self-published writers preparing for publication.
New writers who would like plenty of detail and guidance to help them continue on their journey.
(Note: Developmental Edits are only available for finished drafts that have already undergone a round or more of self-revision)
Questions we will answer
Is your character believable and interesting? Do they embark on a journey of self-discovery (or downfall) over the course of the story?
Is your plot satisfying, with proper pacing, cause-and-effect, and emotional investment?
Is there a broader message or theme that is strengthened by the characters, plot, and world? Are motifs effective and evocative?
Are there any lapses in logic or believability?
Does the form of your project (prose style, POV, etc.) serve the story you want to tell?
Deliverables
At the end of the edit, you will receive:
An edit letter (15+ pages) based on two read-throughs.
An annotated document with marginal comments.
A book map/chart of your plots and sub-plots (a helpful way for us both to visualize your story and fix gaps!)
Advice on where to go next, as well as resources that might help you moving forward (if applicable).
Cost:
$0.03/word $0.021/word, with a $300 minimum (Special Introductory Pricing until 12/31/24)
For reference, an 80,000 word novel would cost $2,400 $1,680.
Still Have Questions?
Check out my FAQ and policies pages, or fill out my contact form.
The Developmental Edit
Future Services
These are the services I am planning to provide once there is enough interest and/or I have completed the proper training. If you are especially interested in any of the following services, please let me know!
The Line Edit
A full-manuscript edit with a focus on prose clarity, imagery, continuity, and scene structure.
Project Development and Writer Coaching
Video calls, email correspondence, and draft reviews for writers with un-written ideas or unfinished manuscripts. Perfect for writers who are just starting their journey and want guidance and accountability.